What should the title of my story be called? (its for school)?

okay so im not sure what you should name it but i just want to say, that story is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you are an amazing writer! its fantastic! the details the wording, its beautiful! i could picture the whole thing in my head! i would luv it if u could like put out the rest, i honestly really want to read it. The only grammar thing i noticed was when Rhian scream WHAT, and u had an ! when there should have been a question mark and an exclamation mark.